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Please…
Hear my plea.
I stand here
In some lonely streets

On a cold winter’s night.
Waiting…
Waiting for someone
Who I doubt

Will come
And free me…
Free me
From my shadowy prison.

Bless me
One more time;
Like you did
Long ago

On that warm
And romantic,
Summer’s night.
Dreamily flashbacks…

Haunting nightmares…
Screeching calls of your name…
Faint memories…
They stay with me forever.

Bless me…
Hold me tight…
Let me touch you again…
Please…

Don’t let me suffer;
Don’t let me wait;
Hear my plea;
Come and rescue me.
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One of my top poems for my 2007 poetry set

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:iconnaddykoo:
Very powerful words in your poem.
In my view this person sounds like they are waiting for some lover to return, maybe they left them or abandoned them for some reason and now they feel alone!

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live life the way you choose
:icontenka-chan:
I really like this one. I am a fan of one word lines, and poems that merely state simple phrases and don't need to go into unnecessary detail. Good job!!!

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"'Just' . . . what a horrible, candle-snuffing word."

J.M. Barrie from Finding Neverland
:iconrobinluvgirl:
Amazing job I must say! :D

I truly love the details and the title caught my eye =]
:iconrockerbybaby:
This is quite a lonely desperate poem, I like :D ....
Thanks much for sharing; keep 'em coming!!
:iconurbman:
it sounds as if you've been there

--
The Worlds a Bitch so Fuck You
:iconxxshad0wxx:
Really?
Truth to tell I haven't even got a love life.

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